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  • Lisa Martin by Lmartin625
    24 September 2008, 10:09 PM

    41.2
    Your resume should not be 2 pages, in my opinion. You should use bullet points instead of paragraphs in your job descriptions. The objective should be omitted. The format should be revised to reduce the amount of white space.

  • New Resume by colinake
    24 September 2008, 09:53 PM

    0.0
    Good start! I would remove the objective. Add a heading for "Work Experience" and remove the GPA. You might also want to make the degree that you have stand out a bit (at first glance, I thought you had a degree in education). Good luck!

  • resume1 by kilgoretrout
    24 September 2008, 09:50 PM

    37.6
    Do you have any relevant work experience? Volunteer work? I think that you should expand your existing Work Experience section and add relevant job functions. Also, try to beef up your skills by adding computer skills (specific software that's useful in your field, etc). Good luck

  • Hardware Engineer by mateja
    24 September 2008, 09:47 PM

    66.6
    I like your format - it's different but still pleasing. The format is a bit crowded, though. You have a bit of room to play with - maybe try moving your address to the same line as your phone number? Just a few suggestions. I find that Objectives are usually unnecessary. I would also remove the citizenship section. Good job and good luck!

  • KDB resume1 by byrdman84
    24 September 2008, 09:41 PM

    44.4
    No objective is needed, neither is "references upon request". You can change the formatting to get the resume to one page easily. I would also move skills under "Work History" Do you have computer skills you could add to your skills section? That might be relevant and useful to your field. Also, you might want to review your use of past/present tense so it can be consistent throughout. Good start and good luck!

  • Retail Assistant by staylor
    16 May 2008, 01:13 PM

    58.7
    Good start. The formatting needs some work - the resume should not be more than one page. Work Experience should be above attributes and skills (below eduction) and the attribute, skills and hobbies should be edited unless they directly relate to the position you're applying to (computer skills, babysitting, writing, web design would be enough in my opinion). Good luck with your search!

  • Sports Management Resume by beebechica
    16 May 2008, 12:59 PM

    86.0
    Nice format. The only thing I'd change would be to remove "Skills Gained" because not all items listed are skills. Also, I might consider making your job title (over the company name) stand out. Good luck - looks good.

  • Analyst3 by Rukasu
    16 May 2008, 12:56 PM

    48.3
    You change tenses several times in the position descriptions. Your current position should be in present tense and all former positions should be in past tense. "the relevent(spelling error) coursework section could be removed. Good start and good luck!

  • Admin asst resume by cweimer59
    16 May 2008, 12:40 PM

    63.5
    I would put work experience first, professional skills second and education last. Your typing skills are low for admin work, so you may want to consider taking a class in that area. I would recommend expanding your job descriptions to include more details about the admin work you've done (you are much more detailed in the Nurse Aide descriptions). Good start, good luck!