Member: jasonp
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- 28 March 2008, 04:25 PM
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29 March 2008, 10:48 PM
[This is my first review, so apologies if I messed up the inline markups on your resume.] You have a good start, but it would be better if you made your verbiage a lot more terse and to the point. Keep in mind that typical recruiters/employers only look at resumes for 15-30 seconds, so you want to make a good of an impression as possible. This means -- as I said in one of the inline comments -- limiting yourself to a couple bullet points per position and focusing on your main responsibilities and your chief accomplishments, especially those that you can quantify. I don't know what industry you're applying for (maybe I just don't know what "MRP" stands for), but if you want to trim your resume even further, you could try removing those positions that aren't quite relevant to the position you're applying for. Hope this helps. -Jason