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  • Finance Resume by disrael1
    15 April 2008, 03:07 AM

    84.8
    Excellent resume! Only two things I can suggest. Firstly, the LSE thing in China. This is a summer course equivalent to one course at your uni that you would have got academic credit for? If so, then certificate is probably the wrong word. Probably sufficient to say "Completed course in Management and Entrepreneurship". Second thing is that I think you need to quantify your experience a bit more. Numbers jump out and it would be good if you could say things like "Developed x, resulting in y. Otherwise pretty much perfect. GPA is a little low but you make up for it somewhat with the 3.8 in Finance and the study abroad.

  • 2008 by db145
    10 April 2008, 05:15 AM

    46.8
    I'd keep it to one page since you don't have much experience to outline. Consider removing the work experience in retail. Also, you need to fix up the language a bit. Could be more professional. If you can get more experience between now and graduation that'd be very helpful as your resume is a bit light in that regard.

  • A--help help help!! by azshah16
    10 April 2008, 04:50 AM

    66.8
    I can only really comment on this resume in regards to consulting. You have some very decent experience and extracurriculars but the problem is that none of it is currently tailored to consulting. Try to quantify results and problem solving/analytical skills. Also, is there any way you can demonstrate an interest in the industry because at the moment it seems like you're very med/volunteering orientated.