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Member: Andrew

Andrew's Resumes

Andrew's Reviews

  • 23 December 2007, 10:28 PM

    74.2
    What would you like to do with this resume in terms of employment? See text bubbles for comments.

  • 13 December 2007, 11:47 PM

    85.7
    This is quite an extensive resume. See my text blurbs for comments. If you seek a position in the career services field you are more than ready from your past work experiences!

  • 12 December 2007, 02:35 PM

    69.7
    I dont like your format.

  • 5 December 2007, 07:07 PM

    81.7
    Grammer, clearly you are a person of expertise communication and from the looks of it, you have dabbled in many forms. This is a slightly unfamiliar format to me but I think it serves the purpose of experience and seriousness. I do have some comments though. Please see text blurbs.

  • 4 December 2007, 08:59 PM

    69.2
    See text blurbs for clarification. I believe this resume needs some re organizing as well. Emphasize internships, and work experience. Leadership experiences should be elaborated upon.

  • 3 December 2007, 07:24 PM

    51.7
    See text blurbs. Good start but I think you need to emphasize your strengths and "cut the fat" on weaknesses. Instead of having an objectives section, try emphasizing the skills you obtained to become an office admin. ie. did working at publix give you experience to be a good office admin? if not, delete it.

  • 3 December 2007, 07:20 PM

    85.2
    See text blurbs. I would see en2008's resume for some template help

  • 3 December 2007, 02:33 PM

    90.0
    I love this resume. I think you have excellent experience. Check text blurbs for comments.

  • 1 December 2007, 04:19 PM

    78.3
    I like the format. Maybe expand the top info a bit so there is a larger presence and less white space on the top of the page. I also like the coursework section. Also, would there by any way to include your real estate experience?

  • 30 November 2007, 10:56 AM

    87.3
    Wow, you seem like a really driven person. I believe your goals and work experience are perfectly in line. keep up the good work! I can't really see any apparent flaws. It would be nice if you could add more under Banque Bemo while still maintaining the page limit.