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Member: robbyj

robbyj's Resumes

robbyj's Reviews

  • 28 August 2008, 09:38 AM

    56.2
    Not a bad start, try to keep things to one page.

  • 12 December 2007, 10:25 PM

    75.0
    This is a well constructed resume. My largest comment would be to keep your resume to one page. In fact, I see you almost have two resumes in one here. I suggest keeping your experience in the art world for positions you're applying for in that area for one resume. On the other resume I'd focus on your experience in hire education career services. But overall, you have great experience on each of these industries! Be sure to help others out in the community with your knowledge of the career services sector.

  • 8 December 2007, 11:38 PM

    78.3
    I very much like what you've done with your resume. The overall flow is very good and your experience is well organized. I have a few comments on content and a few comments on format. See text bubbles and highlighting for more information. Otherwise, keep up the good work, I'm sure you've landed a nice job!

  • 6 December 2007, 07:37 AM

    80.8
    Overall, you have outstanding experience in your areas of expertise. My main concern is with your format. Although you have enough experience to merit a two page resume, I believe you can modify the format to really enhance the initial impression you give to prospective clients/employers. I have some comments : scroll over text bubbles to view. Additionally, given the high scores on your resume, consider sharing your knowledge with others in the Razume Community, especially those in PR, Marketing, Communications, etc.