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  • 20 January 2009, 12:17 AM

    90.4
    In red, is there any value added in that line, I understand you want to show your whole exp. but with no details given, it appears to just be clutter on the paper. Your grades are great. However, given some of your interests, (and this is not meant to be offensive) I have heard stories of 4.0 students not getting the job because the interviewer deems them to be too dull and boring and no fun. Is there anything else to include in your last, "Other" section that might be more 'fun'? Finally, make sure its not more than 1 page.

  • 20 January 2009, 12:04 AM

    48.8
    1) I would suggest getting a more formal e-mail address, probably from Gmail 2)your objective needs more focus. Are you looking to be an excutive assistant? I would format it as follows: Objective Education Employment Skills Other You also want to create bullet points under each position of what you did. Example * Assisted in executing weekly payroll * Reconciled daily cash on hand, which amounted to $500. You want to have clear points, and they should be in the past tense (everything basically having an action verb ending in -ed) Do you have an Associates Degree? If you did graduate, list it. Try to line up everything. Someone will spend less than 1 minute on your resume, then judge to see if they like you. Make sure it is pleasing to the eye, and easy to read. Finally, a suggestion regarding the layout is written. Remember, NO MORE than 1 page.

  • 15 January 2009, 03:00 AM

    83.8
    Comment 1 I have been told that you dont list CFA until you PASS level1 of CFA (even though your local society sponsored you) Also, are you actually publishing this case study? or a case study from class? 2) Perhaps just something like a category of OTHER as this seems cluttered