Member: Razz Master
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14 September 2007, 09:23 AM
Welcome to Razume! This is a great start, but needs some bulking up. I would suggest starting with your bullet points under work experience. Make these longer, more action oriented and more convincing. (take a look at some top rated resumes for reference). Additionally, I would break out the skills and activities sections into two groups. I saw this before with another resume. Lastly, I suggest removing the last two lines. These should be assumed and/or discussed during interviews. Try to think like a professional recruiter...they're not making decisions on general info, but rather, tangible experience/skills. Overall, it needs some work, but has great potential. Also, make sure to help the rest of the community with your comments and provide more information to the Razume community about where you'd like to take your career!