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- Career Field
- Communications Consulting Defense Contracting Government & Politics Information Technology Military Service Project Management Public Relations Technology
- Location
- New York, NY
- Major
- Information Systems
- Salary Range
- $90-100,000
Hello! Are you doing KSAs to apply for positions?Id suggest using bullet points to help someone read through the resume. Verb tense is first-person present in Profile...Hold, not holds (3rd person).Focus more on accomplishments and skills. You are mostly listing WHAT you have done. Think along the lines of "WHY did it matter?"
Are you currently earning your degree? If so, list it as:Expected, May 2008 or whenever you expect it!
You are doing a lot of job jumping here. Depending, that may be fine for your circumstances. Also, you should list City, State for all of your jobs.
DO revise to incorporate skills and accomplishments...It makes all the difference!
Bullet points are needed badly. You cant tell where sentences begin or end quickly.
Remove this references part as well. If they want references, theyll ask.
Comments
Hello!
Overall, I really like the look of your resume. However, you should include bullet points to help the reader get through it. See comments in the text and body..."Punctual" isn't really an impressive skill for the top - choose something else :-)
I'm happy to help if you need it!
Good luck,
Miriam Salpeter
Keppie Careers
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I agree with Miriam, bullet points need to be added. Otherwise it looks pretty good. The profile piece at the top could also be removed and saved for your covers letters.
comments...
why the short durations for your last three jobs? were these contract positions? if so, you should indicate that parenthetically. some employers are wary of 'job hoppers' but understand if you are a contractor.