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theiceman2010
Job Seeker • -15
Posted 15 April 2009, 09:43 PM

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this isnt work experience. This is extracirricular activities
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GPA? Awards? Scholarships?
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$500M is 500,000. Did you mean $500 million? The correct abbreviation for million is two ms (ex: $500mm)
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What does served mean? What was your role? What value did you add to this project?
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what were these quotes used for?
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why did you coordinate with the local government? was this a project to enhance a neighborhood? more detail here would help sex this item up.
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how is this present if you are still in school? Did you fly to St Louis to work here on the weekend? A bit confusing.
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very subjective. I would try to atleast elaborate on how here.
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I would word this: "Evaluated and selected new inventory from third party vendors"
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What did your coursework include? You didnt list any classes. The sentence below doesnt tell me what classes youve taken but instead focuses on the regions youve studied.
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Expected????
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ruthlessgravity
Resume Expert • 1355
17 April 2009, 08:55 AM
Needs some work, but not a bad start.


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