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aeffron
Job Seeker • -5
Posted 31 March 2009, 06:20 PM

Ashley Effron

Four years in college and a wide array of exposure to the advertising and public relations industry. Still not sure how I found time for activities outside of classes, but it has made me a stronger and well-rounded individual.


Country
United States
Career Field
Advertising
Location
Tulsa, OK
Major
Journalism
Salary Range
$30-35,000


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samb
Resume Expert • 870
10 April 2009, 11:15 AM
Ashley, I like what you've done with your resume. I have a few suggestions, but overall, it’s impressive. On format, I'd consider minimizing the font for the section headers ("Education, Work Exper", etc.) and starting your bullet language farther to the left. Doing this will help you more fully fill the page. Otherwise, at first glance, you run the risk of looking as though your resume lacks content, which is not the case given your work experience to date. Additionally, try to add more language behind each bullet point. When extending your bullet points try to focus on quantifiable values to describe your achievements at work. For example, you mention "50% of overall competition score", which is the type of information you want throughout your resume. Further, ensure these values relate to advertising, your chosen field. Best of luck, and be sure to send out your link (razume.com/review/resume/9057) on twitter and elsewhere to request reviews. Best of luck!


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