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- Country
- United States
- Career Field
- Advertising
- Location
- Tulsa, OK
- Major
- Journalism
- Salary Range
- $30-35,000
Comments
Ashley, I like what you've done with your resume. I have a few suggestions, but overall, it’s impressive. On format, I'd consider minimizing the font for the section headers ("Education, Work Exper", etc.) and starting your bullet language farther to the left. Doing this will help you more fully fill the page. Otherwise, at first glance, you run the risk of looking as though your resume lacks content, which is not the case given your work experience to date. Additionally, try to add more language behind each bullet point. When extending your bullet points try to focus on quantifiable values to describe your achievements at work. For example, you mention "50% of overall competition score", which is the type of information you want throughout your resume. Further, ensure these values relate to advertising, your chosen field. Best of luck, and be sure to send out your link (razume.com/review/resume/9057) on twitter and elsewhere to request reviews. Best of luck!
