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- Career Field
- Mechanical Engineering
- Location
- Washington, DC
- School
- George Washington University
- Major
- Engineering
There is a lot of empty space surrounding the "Washington DC". Think about changing the format so that it is on neat and even lines..so bring Expected Graduation Date: May, 2009 up a line.
Switch experience with technical skills on the page.
GPA?
get rid of directly here, since you use it in the previous sentence
See if you can add another bullet point in here about your experience..what applicable skills did you develop?
No need to bold this
Comma
Nice.
There is a lot of empty space surrounding the "Washington DC". Think about changing the format so that it is on neat and even lines..so bring Expected Graduation Date: May, 2009 up a line.
Switch experience with technical skills on the page.
GPA?
get rid of directly here, since you use it in the previous sentence
See if you can add another bullet point in here about your experience..what applicable skills did you develop?
No need to bold this
Comma
Nice.
Think about moving expected graduation up a line. The "Washington DC" looks lonely.
Comma
No need to bold here.
I suggest moving skills to the bottom, focusing on edu, and work exper, first.
Add more detail here. GPA if above 3.0
Your work experience will be a key part of your resume. Be sure to add more bullets to recent experience and fewer going down. Add more detail and focus on what the recruiter would want to hear.
Remove this part.
You might want to add your GPA in here (provided its appropriate). Also, expand the "B. S."
You have SO much blank space here! You might want to right align all of your dates and locations over here, so that it doesnt make your resume look so centered.
Take this out - unnecessary.
Use a different word other than "helped". You could say "Solved complex problems that arose...", or something more active than just you "helping".
You might want to switch your technical skills section and your experience section, but Im not sure what Engineering Resumes typically have.
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GM- This is a good start. Think about adjusting your format to get rid of the blank spaces.
GM- This is a good start. Think about adjusting your format to get rid of the blank spaces.
You need some work on your resume, but a good start. Try adding more detail and rearranging some of the sections. Be sure to look at top rated resumes here for examples.
Your skills section is fantastic, and it's a good start on the resume. I would work to have stronger job points and on the actual structure.