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barryman
Job Seeker • 90
Posted 17 March 2008, 12:57 PM

Technology Professional


Career Field
Information Technology
Location
Austin, TX
Major
Information Systems
Salary Range
$35-40,000


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Remove this objective statement, its not adding much value,
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Consider having Work Experience, Education then Honors/Skills in that order.
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need to emphasize
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need more experience
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You have some nice experience, but need to limit the number of bullet points listed. You should have 4-6 for the most recent job and progressively fewer bullet points for each job going down.
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Big4
Resume Expert • 2855
17 March 2008, 01:35 PM
Barry, given you are a recent undergrad graduate, I suggest keeping your resume to one page. Further, make sure to move your education section below your work history now that you've graduated. Best of luck.

yathrib
Resume Expert • 100
17 March 2008, 11:01 PM
I have to say, your Operations Tech and System Administration experience is going to be a lot more interesting to me than the half-dozen lines of soccer awards. Feel free to put that at the end in an "interests" section.

yathrib
Resume Expert • 100
17 March 2008, 11:02 PM
Also, for lines that wrap a single word ("Symantec Ghost Console", "Remote Desktop Control Software"), try to re-write to eliminate the wrappage -- it's eating space for nothing.

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11 July 2008, 08:19 PM
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