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keefermilton
Resume Expert • 70
Posted 19 March 2009, 10:48 PM

Keefer Milton

My resume. Inactive since the end of 2007.


Country
United States
Career Field
Sales
Location
Tulsa, OK
Salary Range
$65-70,000


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Very good header. Makes your name stand out from others. Also simple and good looking.
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Big4
Resume Expert • 2855
22 March 2009, 10:28 AM
Overall, your resume is well constructed. I very much like the bulleting language and your use of numerical values to highlight your achievements. I would suggest adding an education or skills section to complement your work experience. Further, consider shortening the narrative text at the top of each work experience section. As a former recruiter, I can tell you I paid little attention to large blocks of text and skimmed the resume for numerical/bulleted highlights. Again nice work here and thanks for providing reviews to others on Razume. I'm sure they greatly appreciate your insight. Best of luck.

dfault312
Job Seeker • 150
22 March 2009, 12:14 PM
As Big4 said, shorten or eliminate the narrative text. It won't be read. Use some of it in your cover letter and save the rest for an interview. You also may want to include education and other related activities. Try to keep everything on one page. If an employer isn't sold after the first page, they aren't going to continue to the second. Also, see notations.

keefermilton
Resume Expert • 70
22 March 2009, 02:37 PM
Thanks for the feedback. I definitely agree on the single page comment. The pdf version of this is a single page with a much more attractive typeface, but the uploading changed some of that. I have no formal education outside of high school. I have considering adding a high school gpa, but my thinking is that it would highlight my lack of higher education which automatically tosses me in the round file. I'm fairly well spoken so most recruiters assume the education is there and I'm at least granted an interview which gives me the opportunity to highlight, in person, my experience over formal education. I will consider adding training courses that I've completed. Great feedback on the preambles as well. They are a bit lengthy. I will work to condense them.


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