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put this information on a cover letter. Resume real estate is too valuable
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Conducted is a much stronger verb here.
what was the result of these items? What was the accomplishment?
I would not list this above your degree, even though it is chronological. I would perhaps move this to under your skill category
While you can consider these items skills, they arent the types of skills that I feel should be listed on a resume. The interview is where these skills are evaluated, so listing them here doesnt add much value. I would seek to list skills that are unique...like the communication course you took
different font size from other jobs? make consistant
Remove your objective.
I suggest moving your skills section to the bottom, focus on hard skills rather than communication and soft skills.
I agree, Carnegies book is great, but your degree is what recruiters want to see.
Nice work quantifying your resume. Just add more detail and tailor your langauge to specific positions you would like to have, if possible.
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You have a good base to work off of to improve your resume. I have a few suggestions listed in the comment boxes. I would also align all the dates to make it easier to follow your progression.
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atan, you have a good start here with your resume, but you should try to professionalize the language as much as possible. Additionally, the objective does not add value if you don't have a specific focus. Prior to updating your resume, I'd take some time to evaluate your strengths and form a strategy for approaching the job market. You have some solid business experience, so where would you like to go next? Feel free to comment at the bottom if you have questions or want to clarify your goals.
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