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peppy
Job Seeker • 75
Posted 16 March 2008, 09:44 AM

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Career Field
Investment Banking
Location
Undecided
School
Other
Major
Computer Science
Groups
Other
Salary Range
$65-70,000


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You should rework your format: focus on Education, Work Experience and Skills sections in that order (unless youve graduated, then move work experience up top).
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Why do you have two columns of inormation, keep it simple, dont make recruiters work harder than they have to
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Nice experience with DB. This will open many doors for you. Try removing the summary section and only listing 4-6 bullet points.
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You need to improve your bullet points with more detail and by quantifying your experience. Youre in a quant field, be sure to describe your work history with numbers/$ amounts!
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Big4
Resume Expert • 2855
16 March 2008, 02:19 PM
Peppy, you have great experience from DB, but I think your format is not very traditional. I'm sure you can get a job with this resume, but recruiters will have a much easier time finding the right information if you stick with a standard, more professional format.

peppy
Job Seeker • 75
16 March 2008, 02:35 PM
thanks for the comments Big4 - what do the yellow lines mean?

Anonymous
Unknown • ?
16 March 2008, 06:47 PM
an overall nice resume .. but should higlight a bit more on educational achievements IB_BANKER

Anonymous
Unknown • ?
16 March 2008, 09:54 PM
comments...

Anonymous
Unknown • ?
17 March 2008, 08:34 AM
http://ibtalk.com/forum/17/54071/

samb
Resume Expert • 875
17 March 2008, 08:45 AM
Yellow lines are just to highlight the bulleted section that you should focus on.


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