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Big4
Resume Expert • 2855
Posted 15 March 2008, 06:13 PM

Big 4 Resume




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Overall, your resume utilizes excellent use of statistics. Would it be beneficial for you to quantify the number of universities? Also, would it add value to list prestigious universities that you worked with?
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Should "report" be plural in this context?
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HI! When I was working in fixed-income finance, we used:mortgage- and asset-backed. Generally, I advise clients to avoid "assisted," as it is a bit vague. Same with "aided." What were you doing? More importantly, how? Why was it important?
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You dont need a start-finish date for school, just degree date. Also, consider putting your awards in reverse chron order - most recent first. Honestly, your first-year student award isnt really necessary, or even Deans list - your GPA is high enough that its clear you did well. Could use those lines for other, more interesting topics.
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Consider a highlights or similar section...Keywords might be useful. See my site for examples:www.keppiecareers.com. Follow link to transformations.
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Consider blocking out less text next time.
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Fireinthesky
Job Seeker • 110
16 March 2008, 09:59 PM
Overall an excellent resume. I am not familiar with financial markets, so I am not sure about certain verbage.

Anonymous
Unknown • ?
18 March 2008, 05:31 AM
Your resume looks fantastic, I've picked up a lot from it. May I know what font you used?

Big4
Resume Expert • 2855
18 March 2008, 08:54 AM
For headers I used style (under format) "TableMatrix", format"Times New Roman" and size "10". I also varied some headers with all caps or italics. For bullet text I used the same font and size with style "bullet 4". I have been told this format is used by Dartmouth MBAs.

Anonymous
Unknown • ?
18 March 2008, 11:37 AM
Thanks a lot mate! Much appreciated.

Anonymous
Unknown • ?
30 March 2008, 08:26 PM
comments...

Anonymous
Unknown • ?
1 April 2008, 01:08 PM
Since this is one of the best resumes on here could you put up a template of it somewhere? This site should have a feature like that build in.

cansung
Job Seeker • 80
8 April 2008, 03:59 PM
Hello Big4, you put my resume to shame. I am in no position to critique your resume. Nonetheless, please review mine and let me know what areas I could work on to land those jobs. If you don't think I can make it, do let me know, real talk is much appreciated. Thanks, cansung.

Keppie Careers
Resume Expert • 800
9 April 2008, 11:11 PM
Looks very nice...Some suggestions to consider. Include more accomplishments. Think "resulted in..." and say how! Should the Lehman and Citigroup jobs be reversed? Dates are a bit confusing, as you have 2005 working for both. Good luck! Miriam Salpeter Keppie Careers

dsarin
Job Seeker • 150
24 April 2008, 07:44 PM
Your resume is fantastic. I was just wondering if you could give me some advice and suggestions on mine! Look forward to hearing from you. Thanks.

lewisjohn
Job Seeker • 150
29 April 2008, 09:53 PM
Your resume is excellent. Thank you for sharing this.

samb
Resume Expert • 870
30 May 2008, 09:19 AM
Excellent format. Nice work with this resume. Continue with your great reviews for others.

johnation33
Job Seeker • 100
28 June 2008, 10:46 AM
Hey Big4, great resume! I have a question, what font/settings did you use for your headings like Citigroup or Lehman Brothers? I tried Times New Roman and it doesnt come out that way.

Anonymous
Unknown • ?
2 July 2008, 11:04 PM
It is difficult to comment on potential to be hired without the the goals explicitly stated, but I would say that relevant experience is important. Ideally, employers (especially in the current environment) like to progression and commitment to a position. One page is a plus - highly recommended. Salary ranges are consistent with the relevant experience.

HealthcareMGR
Job Seeker • 105
11 July 2008, 05:25 PM
I like your format and the fact that you highlighted your achievements.

westernkings
Job Seeker • -5
6 September 2008, 09:40 AM
could you review mine please ? I have looked at some of your reviews and they seem incredibly helpful. thanks

Alt18
Job Seeker • -5
10 January 2009, 06:28 PM
Very impressive. Would you be so kind as to take a look at my resume, please? I could definitely learn a lot from your expertise. Thanks so much.

elgreco86
Job Seeker • 90
26 January 2009, 10:53 PM
Great CV for Operations Division!

dfault312
Job Seeker • 150
22 March 2009, 12:19 PM
As someone else notated, the dates seem to fit better on the right side next to the location. Also, you may want to consider making your header stand out more. I can't tell because it's blacked out, but do something bold and simple with definite character that will stand out when an employer first sees your resume.

wedgech
Job Seeker • 0
30 May 2009, 02:40 PM
Your resume looks great! Would you review mine. I would greatly appreciate it.

bwggpb
Job Seeker • 50
30 August 2009, 03:30 AM
You have an impressive Resume and I saw that you are giving some good resume advice. May I ask you to take a quick look at mine (content, format, language...). Thx a lot.

bwggpb
Job Seeker • 50
30 August 2009, 03:34 AM
What font are you using? It's really impressive though I'm not the most qualified person to judge a resume.

bwggpb
Job Seeker • 50
30 August 2009, 03:43 AM
Are you also Co-founder of Razume?

JobSeeker_898
Job Seeker • 0
5 December 2009, 10:17 AM
heyy.. nice resume, great work ex.. if you are still searching for a job, then good luck.. you have a pretty good chance of landing the one you want.. i am looking to get the kind of work exp you got 2006 onwards. could you let me know, if my resume would attract such jobs? and if not, then what i can do to improve it?


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