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more information about the job tasks. Try quantifying the job tasks.
Include an objective at the top of your resume. What do you want this resume to do for you? What kind of job are you looking for?
Dont include your GPA. If another applicant applies and has a better GPA, thats an immediate quantitive comparison. Dont make it easy for the employer to compare you to another applicant.
Is this your high school? If so, no need to include it if youre already in college. Its a given.
How many portfolio managers?
Is this a computer program?
Create a new section for your memberships.
Put these in the same section, call it "Other Skills and Interests".
This doesnt add much, consider beefing it up or removing. Test scores? Honors?
add: anticipated
Id consider splitting this into seperate sections. One might be "activities" or ideally "leadership activities." Skills would go under a seperate section.
Some of these activities are good and get lost in this list. Seperate them and format them similar to your work experience, with bullet points and dates alligned left, etc. The rest probably dont need dates, looks a bit awkward.
First line here doesnt add much, this should come across in the resume. Interests is OK, but expand to a full line (three interests doesnt necessarily fit with the claim in the first line).
lot of white space up here, and in the resume in total for that matter. Expand on some of the smaller points in your activities to beef this up.
Just say responsibly handled
This is an important skill. Make this more forceful by saying that you noted opportunities for cross-selling and capitalized on them.
this isnt a strong point, but reword it to get to one line
Could just say MS office, unless you have special proficiency in any one of them.
converstional sounds better IMO.
Quantify. How many managers? What kind of services?
did you produce client-facing documents? How many projects did you work on?
Too passive. explain why this is remarkable or what you got out of it.
All in past tense, good.
GPA is good, but is GPA in major higher? consider including. Could also insert relevant coursework depending on firms youre looking at.
Not sure if that needs to be there
Makes sense to me to do more then one section hereDo SkillsAnd then Activities
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Welcome to Razume! This is a great start, but needs some bulking up. I would suggest starting with your bullet points under work experience. Make these longer, more action oriented and more convincing. (take a look at some top rated resumes for reference). Additionally, I would break out the skills and activities sections into two groups. I saw this before with another resume. Lastly, I suggest removing the last two lines. These should be assumed and/or discussed during interviews. Try to think like a professional recruiter...they're not making decisions on general info, but rather, tangible experience/skills. Overall, it needs some work, but has great potential. Also, make sure to help the rest of the community with your comments and provide more information to the Razume community about where you'd like to take your career!
Needs more work
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Excellent education and work experience. This resume just needs an objective and a few tweaks. You can seemore info in my notes, which I hope you will find helpful! Good luck to you!
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