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Fireinthesky
Job Seeker • 110
Posted 15 March 2008, 01:07 PM

First draft

I am seeking to obtain a position with a green energy company, either solar, wind, geothermal, or other. I would like to stay in the DC/Balt area, but I am very open to moving if the opportunity is a good fit. Thanks for any input!




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Razume allows you to black out contact info, no need to modify your resume further.
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Change from Professional experience to "Work Experience"--this should be the core focus of your resume.
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You need a lot of work on your format, and be sure to keep it to one page. Take a look at some top rated resumes on Razume for an idea of what works best.
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Youve done a nice job quantifying your resume--just focus on bullet points only, no need for summary above bullet points. And keep it consistent.
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I would like to see specifics. Which awards? What talents? Show us.
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Consider adding a skills section. Focus on hard skills: language, computer that are specific to the type of work youd like to do.
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Big4
Resume Expert • 2855
15 March 2008, 06:36 PM
Fireinthesky, if you're looking for green energy company's in DC, I suggest getting in touch with Clear Currents (cleancurrents.com), a Rockville based startup in the green energy space. Also, I've heard SmartPower is hiring (smartpower.org). If you're interested in either opportunity, comment back on my resume and I can put you in touch with a few people I know at those organizations. Before sending your resume in, however, I suggest you make a number of improvements. First off, you need to keep your resume to one page. Second, remove the summary piece and consider adding a skills section. See additional comments left. Best of luck.

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3 June 2008, 12:04 AM

josephmcspadden
Job Seeker • 130
14 June 2008, 11:15 PM
Overall, this is a very decent resume. There is a lot of text, though. To maximize your chances of having the entire thing read, I would cut out some sections. Maybe you can remove the qualifications summary and show how you have these qualifications through your professional experiences. If you still need to cut, maybe start with your oldest job, as it might not be as revelent as the others.


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