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Nice work here, but try to shorten your bullets to one line and add more bullets. Also, focus on quantifying your bullet experience. Use numbers, $ values, etc, to describe your organizational impact.
Did you graduate in 2005? its not clear, give a range of years to improve clarity.
Down here your bullet items get less impressive. Take a look at some top rated resumes on Razume for an idea of the bullet structure you should use.
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JSlovesBM, nice improvement here, well done! You can still refine your resume further. What's your strategy for approaching the job market? Don't display that information on your resume, but save it for your cover letter. Rather than having an objective statement up top, your resume should speak through your strategy, which is reinforced by your cover letter and interview discussions. Consider an internship in sports marketing or your career of choice to build your case for working in that field. Best of luck.
GO to page setup on word and shrink this to fit on one page. Format your bullets to the left to include more information. GPR?