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Separate Skills and Activities
Put location and year in a separate column.
Separate the dates in two lines.
should be in activities
This should be the first line
This definitely should be on the second line! Good work.
The top two sentences are really not that much different in their functionalities. Plus, you really should not be saying "demonstrated strong interpersonal skills." Quantifying job functions is fine but qualifying them is not.
You are supposed to consistently achieve goals. Please mention if you exceeded them. If yes, by how much?
Separate heading title Interests
Shadowed the President of Intermetals Corporation and met with leaders of different departments of the steel industry ......
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Overall, it's a good start. I would try to bulk up your work experience section. Even add some of your activities to this section for now, if the fit. Also, don't list so much course work. only courses specific to your career. Even More impressive is a skill set section that shows your tangible skills, such as excel, statistical software, etc.
Lastly, make sure your job titles are consistent and progressive. It's not very convincing to see you went from Manager to Intern. Think about expanding those descriptions.
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Also, This shouldn't be a CV, CV's are similar, but contain much more detail. Think professors or people with lots of published works for CVs.
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I think the resume needs a smoother flow to it. The relevant topics section is unique. But I believe your participation in AEPi should be under the activities section only.
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Well, depending on what you kind of career you want to go into, I could probably make your resume a little more relevant especially by taking away some of the coursework. Good job so far but it would be helpful to get a key internship prior to graduation.
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resume looks good. good luck