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smadigan1052
Job Seeker • 80
Posted 27 February 2008, 06:26 PM

Marketing Manager

Highly experienced in marketing management, account management, and business development. Prefers to work with technical products. Markets/sells such products by focusing on customer benefits, vs. the products' many features. Excels at understanding technical products and markets.




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You really need to do a lot with this resume. As a marketing manager, certainly you might recognize that this piece does not market you well? It is way too long - too many big chunks of text that the reader will never want to review, a long list that isnt visually appealing, the formatting is inconsistent...I would suggest a total overhaul of the format.
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I would find a better way to phrase these sentences than beginning with "Have"
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The dates of employment are not consistent. Here you put "9/07 through 1/08", other place you just put years, others you put "1999 to 2001"
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You include a lot of great accomplishments, but they are lost in the unflattering format.
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channelnew needs to be fixed.
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Are you crossing off your education here? That isnt a good idea. I would include dates. Bachelor of Business Administration is the correct way to list this degree.
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Keppie Careers
Resume Expert • 800
28 February 2008, 05:51 PM
I hope you'll revise this and let me know to take another look at it! Please review my website: www.keppiecareers.com for ideas about how to format a resume that will be read! I would be happy to assist you with this. Contact me at: results@keppiecareers.com Miriam Salpeter, Featured Expert Reviewer, razume

aricross
Job Seeker • 80
29 February 2008, 11:17 PM
May want to add a section for education as well.

Fireinthesky
Job Seeker • 110
15 March 2008, 01:25 PM
You obviously have alot of great achievments and a great history. I would definatly work on your wording and presentation. Happy trails!

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