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I think this whole section, including the title, should be removed. You do not need to summarize your experience in such general terms, save this language for your cover letter.
You should not have a section just for internships, include this with Work experience, but consider only listing two of the six positions. Choose the positions that best matches your future employers goals, not your own personal goals.
Nice work with your detailed descriptions, be sure to show others how to best write bullet details for their Work Experience.
Change this to "Work Experience"
Add your GPA for both schools if above 3.0. Also, because you are still in school, consider moving the Edu section to the top and moving it back down after you graduate.
Pretty strong internship experiences--good work. I think its an impressive piece for your resume.
Do you have a GPA over 3.0 in either school? If so, consider adding it. Is there a concentration with your certificate of mgt.? Id add it (especially if its applicable to whatever field youre aiming for with this resume.
What did you do between graduation and your start date of June 2006?
Unless youre applying to a foreign/international firm where English will be a 2nd language, you might consider leaving "Fluent in English" off.
"Analyzed large quantity..."This sentence seems very ineffective. Change it or remove it entirely.
A bit confusing; at least to me (Im not familiar with programming, engineering, etc.
Clarify this phrase. "The associated risks and issues" of what?
Change this to, "a 6 million dollar," from, "the 6 million dollar..."
Change to, "developed a software..."
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Piyush, nice work with your resume. The overall flow could use some improvement, but you have excellent experience and a very strong academic background. I would suggest improving a few areas, namely the top summary section and the "Internship Experience" section. Best of luck and be sure to share your knowledge by providing reviews to others on Razume.
Pretty good resume. You have quality work experience with a slew of quality internships as well. The format is pretty crisp and easy to read and follow for the most part.
As I noted in my feedback on the resume, I was confused about your relationship with Abbot, Wells Fargo, HR Block, etc. at first, thinking that they were your actual employer. Consider altering your format to make it easier for the reader to see that these companies were project locations, NOT employers. I'd move your title to the far left of the sentence, moving tha co. name over to the right.
Good usage of numbers. They give your resume credibility. Your language can be confusing at times, but I think I put a note where I found some problems or I simply blacked-out words I thought could be omitted entirely. Be careful not to use too many adjectives as well.
Good job and good luck.
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