Razume

The key thing for you is to focus on how you are wording your descriptions - including verb tense - and also be sure to include what accomplishments you offer. Employers want you to make it very clear what you can do for them. This format is a little thick - too many words in a row - and probably too many bullet points. (Also, I'd add periods to all of these.) You have a great start here, and it probably wouldn't take much to fix. I could offer you a deal on a resume edit to get you started! Feel free to contact me and to view my website and blog full of free information: Keppie Careers Best, Miriam Salpeter Keppie Careers