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shawnfogle
Job Seeker • -15
Posted 23 November 2008, 06:26 PM

Melvin L. Fogle

Logistics professional specializing in operations management is looking to join your team and take your company to the next level! Outstanding track record and performance quantified by team and personal awards.




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Keppie Careers
Resume Expert • 800
24 November 2008, 11:56 AM
This looks great! Much improved. Try to avoid passive voice. Example: US Transportation Command adopted instead of what you have here. Focus a bit more on accomplishments. Add results whenever possible. Avoid hanging one word over to the next line - it's a waste of your space. Include your name, email and page 1 of 2, page 2 of 2 in footer. Great! Hope you'll subscribe to my blog and send your friends! Best, Miriam Salpeter

Richard A Angulo
Job Seeker • 20
21 December 2009, 05:24 PM
Only thing I would suggest is to add summary to start of actual resume. This is the kind of to the point resume that gets my attention, cleanly presented, with good format. Definitely request interview as top candidate.


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