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A Ohman
Job Seeker • -10
Posted 20 November 2008, 03:19 PM

Anne Ohman


Country
United States
Career Field
Undecided
Location
Portland, OR
Salary Range
$25-30,000


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Keppie Careers
Resume Expert • 800
20 November 2008, 11:57 PM
I don't think your "cover letter" is doing you much good here. It is way too general. Cover letters need to be targeted for the specific organization. I'd suggest a lot of work on the format of this resume. Review some at my website (below). Good start incorporating skills and accomplishments. Don't say I, me or my in a resume - it is implied. Say "Supported," not "I supported." I have tons of free advice on my site and I'd be happy to help. You have great potential here, but I wouldn't go to market with this version. Keppie Careers Best, Miriam Salpeter

Joel Parks
Job Seeker • 10
22 August 2010, 08:39 PM
I'm not familiar with this field but looking at the resume cold I have a few suggestions: You don't need to use "I", "Me" and "My" so much. Try action verbs instead,. There is a great deal of replication of effort here, too. Find the shortest, most effective way of saying what you did and say it just once. Also terms like "computer familiarity" are too weak. Everyone is "familiar" with computers but you should be "adept", or "expert" or something more unique. Good luck.


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