- San Jose, CA
- Salary Range
it looks like there are two spaces in the spots I highlighted
more about what youve specifically accomplished for some of the companies youve consulted
The best part of your resume is your use of quantified information. Be sure to tell others on Razume how to accomplish quantifying their experience.
This is a very strong résumé, but I think there are still some improvements that can be made. I would have given higher marks on the language front, but it is very verbose. Shortening thing down to bullet points would save quite a bit of room, and allow you to get everything on to one page. (Although you do have the experience to fill on two, so it's probably not a big deal if you're not willing to trim) That being said, I like the narrative-style description at the beginning of each. Keep that, and switch the info that follows to bullets.
I must say, you have really impressive work experience. I would almost hire you myself, however, you need to work on your presentation. The format leaves much to be desired and you don't list any educational background. As the last person mentioned, you would be better off with a one page resume if possible. Comments aside, I'm very interested to hear where you end up. Please keep us informed on your job search progress. Also, be sure to share your knowledge with others in the Razume community.