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Shambora
Job Seeker • -5
Posted 30 October 2008, 08:45 PM

Shambot's Resume

I know many people look down on a "Career Aspirations"/"Objective" section on a resume, but for someone who has little idea what he wants to do specifically, I feel like this section is somewhat necessary.


Country
United States
Career Field
Information Technology Technology Venture Capital
Location
San Francisco, CA San Jose, CA Washington, DC Other
School
George Washington University
Major
Information Systems Philosophy Other
Salary Range
$20-25,000 $25-30,000 $30-35,000 $35-40,000 $40-45,000 $45-50,000 $50-55,000 $55-60,000 $60-65,000 $65-70,000


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This is the first thing peopel will read. Are you sure this is the key information that you want them to take away from your resume? Im not a fan of career aspirations/objectives because they add no value. Its like your trying to sell me something without telling me what Im buying.
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GPA? Awards?? Scholarships? This section could be organized better to make it more readable.
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why did you do this? why are their concerns important?
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what does this mean?
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for what reason?
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Never ever ever ever use "I" on your resume. Reword these to make them action oriented items instead of sentences in an essay.
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Graduation date??
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ruthlessgravity
Resume Expert • 1355
31 October 2008, 07:47 AM
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Needs some work. You need to add more detail to what you did during your work experience. This doesn't say much as of right now. If you put up an updated version, I will take a look at it.


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