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- Career Field
- Advertising Communications Marketing Public Relations
- Location
- Undecided
- School
- Other
- Groups
- Other
- Salary Range
- $40-45,000 $45-50,000
Move all section headers over to the left, and change this header to "Work Experience"
Its too difficult to pick through all your information without bullets. Keep descriptions breif and specific to what would impress recruiters.
Great use of quantifying your resume, it would be nice to see more numbers and $ amounts to describe your experience.
Consider moving your education on top, as youre still in school.
You wouldve already lost me here. Recruiters are looking through hundreds of resumes a day. Im sure it contants a lot of god content but the essay-style presentation would make me move to the next resume. Id suggest bullet points
These are two different degrees. Break them out into two different listings. MBA should be above BS
Expand upon this. Just listing all this stuff tells me nothing about your level of committment to these organizations. Your the Chairman of one. List some bullet points that discuss what your leadership has brought to that organization.
Bullet points
I would remove this information and provide more detail on your community involvement.
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JJwalk, I like your resume, but you can make some important improvements. First off, try using bullet points, rather than paragraph format. Also, if you are still in school, you should move your education section to the top. Best of luck and be sure to repost your resume once your improvements are made.
Your education should be listed first. You are still in school for your masters, so that is your biggest selling point. The information needs to be presented in bullet points in order to maximize the porbability that a recrutier can draw the necessary information. Best of Luck.
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