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mastadulog
Job Seeker • 110
Posted 7 February 2008, 08:55 PM

Entry level finance


Career Field
Investment Banking Investment Management
School
Other
Major
Finance
Salary Range
$45-50,000


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Next time, dont bother changing your info, just redact it with the Razume uploading process.
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This tells recruiters nothing, please remove, otherwise, recruiters will want nothing to do with your resume.
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Add more bullet points, or rewrite. You need more info here.
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Move your skills to the bottom. Focus on computer skills, rather than just courses youve taken.
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Great job quantifying your resume! Keep this up, just add more description to each bullet.
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You really need to add more detail here, it;s crucial to making your resume professional.
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samb
Resume Expert • 875
7 February 2008, 10:45 PM
Mastadulog, next time you post your resume, don't bother changing your contact info. On Razume it's easy to block and personal information. You have a good start with your resume, but it will need some work if you want to be considered by Wall Street firms. You have some solid work experience, but you need to add more detail to make yourself seem as impressive as possible. See comments. Best of luck and keep us posted on your progress.


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