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- Career Field
- Commercial Banking Consulting Corporate Finance Investment Banking Investment Management
- Location
- New York, NY
- School
- Franklin & Marshall College
- Groups
- Other
- Salary Range
- $40-45,000
One GPA is enough, 3.89 is highly impressive, especially for 2 majors and 1 minor.
Its time to remove your high school information. Only keep it when applying for jobs in Mumbai to show you have a local connection.
Move work experience above awards and honors, after your education, this is what employers want to see most out of college.
Consider combining these under one Leadership & Activites category. You have one too many categories right now.
Excellent sentence/bulleting construction. Youve clearly done your homework on resume writing.
Excellent skills section, keep up the good work!
I think you should remove Interests, save this for your cover letter and interview. Keep your resume professional.
Hi! Awards and honors are great, but they are taking up a lot of space on your resume. Pick one or two that are particularly key and describe them at the bottom of your resume.Use the space to incorporate a highlights or skills section at the top of your resume to help direct readers regarding your key skills.
Moving the honors section also allows you to have this impressive job location higher on your resume.
Consider:Demonstrated ____, _________ and ________ skills by carrying out experiments....
Put all dates at the end. No need to emphasize them.
These are good. Consider - "resulting in...."
You are spending a lot of space listing things. Id suggest NOT listing all of this and instead elaborating on the RA job or some of these other positions. Also, you need to break up your experience section into categories to be able to list the Harvard job on the top. Maybe "Reseach and Consulting" as a category. Otherwise, the "current" jobs will be on the top.
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Wow, I must say you're resume is impressive. You've selected an excellent format and have an outstanding GPA. Well done! I have a few minor comments for you, but be sure to build your resume review experience by sharing your knowledge with the community.
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looks cluttered
YOUR RESUME IS WAY TO DENSE. BERY HARD TO READ. It's great that you have so many credentials but you also need to realize that the average resume gets a 15 second review, so making it easy to read is very important.
Thanks for requesting a review. Overall, a very nice presentation. Take a look at my sample resumes: www.keppiecareers.com for ideas about how to make a highlights section and incorporate more skills and accomplishments. Incorporate more results when you can and spend less time on lists of things.
Let me know if there is anything else I can do to assist.
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Miriam Salpeter
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