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grigoras
Job Seeker • 55
Posted 25 January 2008, 03:04 PM

Revised Resume

Wow, until I read what everyone said about my previous upload, I sincerely thought I had a great resume. I'd like to thank everyone who reviewed my previous resume for opening my eyes and motivating me to redesign the whole thing. Hopefully, take two gets a better score.... be brutal!


Career Field
Accounting Consulting Engineering Finance Hedge Funds
Location
Atlanta, GA New York, NY
School
Georgia Institute of Technology
Major
Economics Engineering Finance
Salary Range
$70-80,000


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Consider getting rid of the "with" on these two lines and capitalizing
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I think listing them as your major would be better.
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I recommend leaving out your personal info.
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The hedge funds want to see what you accomplished rather than what you did. Try focusing more on results and quantifying.
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Try listing in this format:Organization, Position, Location (if applicable)
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I see an upside down pyramid scheme, nice touch.
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Anonymous
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25 January 2008, 03:51 PM
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samb
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26 January 2008, 03:32 PM
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Dan, tremendous improvement from your prior resume. Your new resume is MUCH more professional looking. I wish you the best of luck and I'm sure your hard work reformating your resume will pay off. Keep us updated on your job search progress!

mastadulog
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16 February 2008, 05:33 PM
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18 March 2008, 04:23 AM
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