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Khawar
Job Seeker • 60
Posted 14 January 2008, 02:16 AM

Modified Finance Resume

This is a modified version of a previously submitted resume targeted towards an investment banking position




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Although your top level experience is more relevant to Ibanking, consider the message youre sending by disclosing so much about the top job and little about the other job. Add another bullet point for Sodexho to balance things out.
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Although highly impressive, I believe its more appropriate for a cover letter and/or interview. Just my suggestion.
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Consider adding these items as one line, they all relate to your GPA.
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Well done, these are great computer skills to have, certainly important for recruiters.
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Lose the how I paid for my education... it doesnt really mean anything to your employer. To me as a potential employer it says education paid for - no big student loans - can pay him less. No positive benefits from this line so lose it.
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samb
Resume Expert • 870
14 January 2008, 07:18 PM
Your resume is greatly improved, well done! I still believe a few improvements can be made. See highlights for suggestions.

Anonymous
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24 January 2008, 02:59 PM
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djtimca
Job Seeker • 160
7 March 2008, 10:18 PM
Based on recent graduation and lack of professional experience you may need to consider lower paying positions and then prove yourself through performance. This approach could get you into the desired pay bracket quickly (6-8 months) if done right. I would consider adding a well worded objective statement at the top that highlights some of your key attributes. This will have to be primarily personality based a this point due to lack of work experience.

digitalbart
Job Seeker • 190
23 April 2008, 10:21 PM
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