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nosacredcows
Job Seeker • -5
Posted 13 September 2008, 05:15 PM

Web Designer/Graphic Artist

This is my current resume. I know it needs a lot of work - I'm hoping to create something better before I submit it for a Community Relations Coordinator position that has opened up through a previous employer of mine.




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Move this skills section to last.
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Duplicate content with expanded work experience-section.
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Try bullets.
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Ras
Resume Expert • 2455
13 September 2008, 06:07 PM
Much work needs to be done. Lose summary and stick with the professional experience-section. Adopt bullets (easier to read). Include achievements, not just responsibilities. If you can provide quant data, that would be good.

nosacredcows
Job Seeker • -5
13 September 2008, 06:16 PM
Thanks! I really appreciate your input. I'll be re-working it over the next couple of days and then upload the revised copy.


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