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samb
Resume Expert • 870
Posted 31 December 2007, 02:46 AM

Draft Revised, DC Internship

Draft revised: Please provide comments on how to improve the resume for the next draft. Thanks.


Career Field
Undecided
Location
Kansas City, MO Washington, DC
School
Other
Major
Biology


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The areas in Red need the most improvement. Keep things detailed and specific. Think of as many professional experiences that were gained for each item. Start with 2 or 3 bullets for each.
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Only add computer skills if you have enough, otherwise, remove.
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Keep the focus on your current edcuation, rather than high school. be sure to include next semesters courses in addition to this past semester.
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Add activities here, but keep them professional.
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Think of the overall goal before proceeding. What type of internship is this resume for? How can you show that prior experience would make you a good candidate for the job?
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Descripe more of what you have done and how you have helped the projects to be more successful.
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What subjects? and be more specific how you have assisted with the teacher.
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Start with content, then focus on formatting.
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Comments

Anonymous
Unknown • ?
31 December 2007, 02:53 AM
See comments on resume. Be sure to add more details to the work experience before proceeding. Best of luck!

akao
Job Seeker • 100
3 January 2008, 02:20 AM
Please let us know what is your intention of this resume, apply school, job, reference...?

jjwalk
Job Seeker • 125
11 February 2008, 11:36 AM
I think your layout looks great! You should expand on your work experience and try to list accomplishments or major contributions made at each company.

peppy
Job Seeker • 75
16 March 2008, 09:49 AM
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Anonymous
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16 March 2008, 03:09 PM
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16 March 2008, 03:16 PM
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sachinpatel92
Job Seeker • 415
5 April 2008, 05:09 PM
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Anonymous
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30 May 2008, 09:12 AM
This resume needs some work.

toryhargro
Job Seeker • -15
11 August 2008, 10:35 PM
Needs to be fleshed out.


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