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rebbesen
Job Seeker • 70
Posted 14 December 2007, 10:21 AM

Professional resume (as of 12/14/2007)

Mr. Ebbesen is an experienced professional with 14 years as a consultant and information technology (IT) innovator. His expertise includes enterprise architecture (EA) strategy; FEA reference model development and adoption; IT systems strategy, design, and implementation; service-oriented architecture application; and investment portfolio and performance management. Recent focus on enterprise architecture, EA and capital planning integration, and transition strategy.




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I suggest using bullet points to highlight your experience more clearly. Although, your resume format may require full paragraphs. Use what is standard in your field.
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You do a nice job of quantifying your resume. For those scanning through your experience, this makes it easier to find your accomplishments.
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If you have to summarize it probably means you have TOO MUCH TEXT
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this one is neutral
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positive
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Very impressive! Make sure to move this down to the next page.
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Reduce spillover text on your resume. It will look more professional to keep this text on the prior page.
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thi should not be alone an a page fix the margins, spacing or font so it moves on to page 3.
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samb
Resume Expert • 875
16 December 2007, 02:47 PM
Your resume is exceptional for your area of focus. Unfortunately, I do not have the expertise to formally review this resume. None the less, I have a few comments, which you can find on your resume. I recommend email blasting your resume to colleagues that share your expertise. Further, I encourage you to share your resume writing knowledge with others in the community. Best of luck with your work and I look forward to seeing you comments in the community.

Anonymous
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17 December 2007, 09:21 AM
Way too much text. Should be 1 page.

Anonymous
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17 December 2007, 09:28 AM
this is a test

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2 January 2008, 07:48 PM
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