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- Career Field
- Consulting
- Location
- Atlanta, GA
- School
- Emory University
- Major
- Finance
- Salary Range
- $50-55,000
Rename this section to Skills or something else. I suggest removing personal items at the bottom.
Try to structure your experience section like an upside down pyramid. Have the most bullet points on top and fewest on the bottom.
I suggest restructuring this section. Try looking at other top rated resumes. I would not put bullet points down here as you dont have as much information on each item.
Pick one or the other.
please revise. focus on turning section headers into the bullet points.
Comments
Overall, your resume is very solid. You're also coming from a very good business school. I have some comments on your language. The format is fine. I also suggest renaming the last part of your resume. For a more focused review, it would help if you listed the job or career you are seeking.
I dont like your format.
Well done, the activities section needs the most work.
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Experience needs to be more focused on results. I see what you did, but what did you achieve doing it? Also, salary range is a bit ambitious for a soon to be college grad.