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JasonTheExploder
Job Seeker • 70
Posted 7 December 2007, 01:34 PM

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Very impressive. Consider making this stand out more. Big names are great talking points, they also catch the eyes of recruiters.
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You should go into more detail here. Also, quantify this experience if you can.
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List you GPA if above 3.0, you should have that at least in major if youre on Deans list. Im not going to judge either way, deans list looks impressive as is.
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I dont really like "Personal" Change it to Skills & Accomplishments or something like that.
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Good use of numbers, try using 12 instead, stands out better in a string of text. Keep in mind many recruiters only glance over your resume at best.
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You need to go into more detail in some places like these.
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Again, make these names stand out better. Place it at the top of the bullet list possibly. The are impressive. Big namse get jobs.
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samb
Resume Expert • 875
12 December 2007, 06:33 PM
Jason, I saw your previously posted resume. This revised resume is greatly improved! Well done. I still have a few comments. At this point I suggest blasting it out to people in the industry. I just sent it to a friend of mine who works in TV/Internet Broadcasting. Even send it to previous employers for their opinion. Best of luck, and let us know how things turn out.

Anonymous
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17 December 2007, 09:50 PM
maybe put education first? and bold "work experience?"

bryce
Job Seeker • 175
27 May 2008, 05:51 PM
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