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- Career Field
- Marketing
- Location
- New York, NY
- School
- George Washington University
- Groups
- GWU Delta Sigma Pi
have this section as well but I believe I am going to work toward eliminating it. I believe that some college templates suggest it but I have gotten nothing but negative feedback on it.
you have another job/internship that is relevant?
not sure this is an extremely necessary line. This may be able to be expressed through date recognition... (September 2004-December 2007)
exactly the best use of resume real estate. You can keep it in if you want but I would look for something that is more of an accomplishment
does this mean? It seems like double speak. Marketing activities? More detail is needed here.
was done with these results? Were they utilized for a marketing strategy? Who viewed the results?
pieces? more detail please
much assumed these days that if you graduate from college you know how you use office and windows.
personally, dont really like the lines. Your choice.
dont really like "Hobbies" I feel it makes your resume look less professional.
revome this, not needed.
remove this portion. Its not needed given you say Dec 2005.
You should always include an objective at the start of a resume. What kind of job are you looking for?
Though you have an excellent GPA, it isnt wise to put in on your resume. If another applicant alsoincludes this information and they have a higher GPA than you, thats an immediate quantitvie comparison. The goalis let the employerknow that YOU are the person for this job,over anyone else!
Perhaps you can separate this a little more? Maybe put your computer skills in its own category? Also, could you possible include the totoring position in your work experience? Though your work experience is great, if you had anotherposition under work experience, it may give you an extra edge. :)
Look at allignment, especially in the work experience section, it looks sloppy.
space here
Theres a bit of a contrast in the terms you use here.
One line.
put this on a seperate line
Perhaps put these in an activities section. They arent really strictly academic.
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I love this resume. I think you have excellent experience. Check text blurbs for comments.
Very good academic performance combined with relevant experience. The resume is very good and is just in need of a few revisions in my humble opinion.
Sonia, well done on your resume! Matha Stewart experience--that's really unique abd exciting, I wonder what it's like to work for her? I have a few suggestions, take a look at the text bubbles. And nice coffee cup!
Overall, this is a great resume and I hope you willfind my notes helpful. you should always have an objective and taylor it to the particular job tht you are applying for. Best of luck to you!
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