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- Career Field
- Finance
- Location
- New York, NY
- School
- George Washington University
- Major
- International Business
- Salary Range
- $55-60,000
should consider changing the font for the parts in red. I thnk all caps does not fit well.
good job quantifying your resume!
move your category headers over the the lefthand side. It will look more professional.
Resume is missing a power statement. Im not talking about an objective (those are useless) but a power statement. (Such as: "Results-driven, highly successful Information Technology Executive interested in applying proven project management and system conversion skills along with exceptional global team management ability to progressive IT leadership team.")
uneccesary information.
Great job bringing attention to your highest achievemnt.
perhaps this should go on top of your list?
No need to bullet point Recognition and Results.
Perhaps you could mention #7 out of the total number.
Create a separate column for the date separate from the sentences.
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Work experience should be above education information...
Oldschool, Very nice resume. You clearly have excellent work experience, my only comments are on format. I disagree with the other comment about putting experience on top. You're still in school so education should be first--nice job. For more comments scroll over my text bubbles.
Left justify your section headings.
Good use of quantifying experiences.
I would remove your highschool you are close to graduating college there really isnt a use for your high school to be on your resume.
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It is not clear from the resume what position it is you are looking for. Resume is missing a power statement on the top. I’m not talking about a career objective (those are useless). I’m talking about a power statement that introduces the potential candidate in a nutshell, something like this: “Results-driven, highly successful Information Technology Executive interested in applying proven project management and system conversion skills along with exceptional global team management ability to progressive IT leadership team.”
This will be just a sentence on the top of the resume, kind of like a mini-resume within a resume.
Another major omission from the resume is the accomplishments. How did you make a difference in the operations of the company? What did you do there that you are really proud of, perhaps something that nobody asked of you? Did you save / earn money for the company in some way? How and how much? How did you distinguish yourself as an intern? Or, within the other positions? It is not clear how YOU stand out and why someone should interview you and not someone else applying for the same position.
When talking about your accomplishments, make sure to make them stand out. Right now everything is in a bulleted list within your resume. But this way, nothing stands out. In order to make the accomplishments stand out, include only THOSE in a bulleted list and everything else (your daily duties / responsibilities), group together in a paragraph format (not too long.) I see that you are hiding some of your results and accomplishments at the end of the long bulleted lists. That is a problem because they are very hard to notice. By doing what I described above, you will make them stand out. Let me know if you have any questions.
Great work Experience!
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