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your capitalization consistent. Youve got a lot of words randomly capitalized mid-sentence.
You should rewrite your objective. Many resumes dont include ojbectives, but if you do want one keep it brief.
go into more detail about your academic experience. Add your GPA if greater than 3.0.
make these items in yellow, bullet points. Add more detail as well--try to quantify your resume with $ amounts, # of people, amount of time.
sure if this is necessary. I assume you are applying for positions where this is assumed.
resume to one page.
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This is a good rough draft, but there are a few spelling errors that don't reflect so well on your potential to be hired. Once you fix up the language, you should be in much better shape, though. Try reading everything out loud, and you'll probably find some of the places where you need to rewrite.
Paul, your resume is a good start, but it needs some work. Also, keep it to one page. Scroll over my text bubbles for more info. Best of luck!
See text blurbs. Good start but I think you need to emphasize your strengths and "cut the fat" on weaknesses. Instead of having an objectives section, try emphasizing the skills you obtained to become an office admin. ie. did working at publix give you experience to be a good office admin? if not, delete it.
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Resume needs a little more meat. I'm sure it is clear to you but you neads to explain more as to your experience and objective