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- Career Field
- Corporate Law
- Location
- Washington, DC
- School
- George Washington University
- Major
- Accountancy
- Groups
- GWU Delta Sigma Pi Other
- Salary Range
- $60-65,000
I think you should remove this item. Save this for your interview, its illegal for employers to assume you dont have working status.
have too much information here. Move some of it to the bottom under Activites.
should add longer sentences about your work experience. Be sure to quantify what you did by talking about $ amounts, time, number of people.
tangible results are needed for your accomplishments. You have the what but dont explain who it was done for and what the result was. The items you have listed are too general and dont do enough to differentiate you from the next candidate. A better example could be "Provided support to the internal counsel on recovering lost funds that resulted in $xxx added to quarter 2 financials"
more detail of results are needed. The John Kotter definition of leadership is to "start a new organization or take an existing organization in a new direction." What did your leadership bring to the organization that added value? That is the difference between just managing an organization and leader one.
thing here. What line of business is Mey Pak in? As an outsider I would like more information on what they do.
Recruiters are going to want to know what your GPA is. If it is above 3.0 then I would recommend that you list it.
pretty much assume that you can use Microsoft Office coming out of school. Its up to you if you want to keep this in but it is valuable real estate on your resume that I feel can be put to better use.
interests? Reading? Skiing? Basketball? etc. It will help to show that you are a 3 dimensional person and explains what you do with your free time. Also good in interviews as a conversation starter.
Service? Social responsibility is something a lot of employers are looking for these days and community service can give insight into your values
Resume should not include anything that may give away religious beleifs/political affilliation/race/ect.
What kind of software have you used for web design?
No need to include info about citizenshipunless you are specifically asked for it.
Any way you can put this in the form of a list?
there is a lot of white space chilling on the right of the page. you might want to decrease this margin to make it even with the left one, giving you more room for what you want to say. this can be helpful in the future as you add more experience
im not sure this is necessary. i think if an employer had a question about it, then you could clarify, but otherwise i think it is assumed info
put these awards and scolarships in their own section
include your grades
what is your native language
i dont know what organizer is -software program?
how good is your excel? if your great make more of a thing about it
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I like the format. Maybe expand the top info a bit so there is a larger presence and less white space on the top of the page. I also like the coursework section. Also, would there by any way to include your real estate experience?
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Not a bad resume for someone at your age (making an assumption based off the year you will graduate). You need more finance and leadership experience to set yourself apart from the rest of the pack. Add more detail to your current experience to help get yourself an internship in finance. Corporate law will require you to take the LSAT, so add that detail to your resume once you take it. I-banking is a very tough industry to break into and will require you to demonstrate that you are the best of the best coming out of school. A big time internship during the school year would help you demonstrate a strong interest in an i-banking interview.
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Not clear why you transfered.
Not clear on level of language skill/abilities.
Do you hold citizenship/ability to work in Korea/China?
You have excellent educational background and goos experience. I hope you will find my notes helpful!
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great format and organization. a reader can get lost in your awards section near the top, and you might want to fix that in some way...
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you need to include your grades
put the scolarships and awards in their own section