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MBB
Job Seeker • 65
Posted 30 November 2007, 03:42 AM

Goal: Strategy Consulting Internship

I'll be submitting this resume to employers for junior year summer internship positions in strategy consulting.




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this format
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have great grades! Keep up the good work. Youll be at BCG in no time!
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Leadership section is a little confusing. It looks like Hilltop Consultants should be included in Experience. Try to think of a different title, like "Activites" or "Organizations" to make it more clear.
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well done. You have the word "consulting" in many places--its clear what you want and Ill sure youll get a top level position.
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lines dividing the sections are a bit unnecessary. Might cause issues with the systems some employers use to scan resumes.
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job with explaining the what. I like the way you support what you did by stating what it was done for and what the result was.
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you learned trends but what kind of trends. Does this really set you apart from the rest of the applicants that you learned something on the job. I would much prefer to see an accomplishment with a tangible result.
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of your examples of leadership experience are great. They show that you have taken risks and delivered results.
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with Microsoft products is pretty much expected. I would add a line containing your non-work related interests. That will help show potential employers that you are not all work and no play. It will also add conversational topics to your interviews.
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What degree was earned during this period?
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Why wouldnt this whole section be grouped into the "Experience" subheading?
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Need to correct the spelling of "Lexis-Nexis". Specify Microsoft products.
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What program is this?
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I really like the inclusion of this section! Great idea.
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Did you transfer to G-town? I almost did :) and a 4.0 is fabulous..keep it up!
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Anonymous
Unknown • ?
30 November 2007, 09:03 AM
I really like this format. Your descriptions seemed to be focused on your goals. I would consider adding some other activities you participate in to show some well roundedness.

Andrew
Job Seeker • 195
30 November 2007, 10:56 AM
Wow, you seem like a really driven person. I believe your goals and work experience are perfectly in line. keep up the good work! I can't really see any apparent flaws. It would be nice if you could add more under Banque Bemo while still maintaining the page limit.

samb
Resume Expert • 875
30 November 2007, 05:46 PM
This is an excellent resume. I expect this resume to be one of the top rated on Razume. Next time tag your resume with management consulting, so people can find it more easily. See my text bubbles for comments.

ruthlessgravity
Resume Expert • 1355
3 December 2007, 08:47 AM
This is a great resume. You have truly demonstrated a keen interest in the field that you would like to enter. Your work experience, academic background, leadership experience, and international work makes you a highly targeted recruit for the big management consulting firms. Good luck.

aylagan
Job Seeker • 115
3 December 2007, 03:12 PM

DJS
Job Seeker • 165
22 January 2008, 02:50 PM
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Anonymous
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11 February 2008, 09:10 AM
Fix spelling errors and clarify education.

djtimca
Job Seeker • 160
5 March 2008, 07:43 AM
One thing missing here that I think is very important is an objectives statement which outlines the type of position you are hoping to land. Moving into a professional resume rather than one you might have used before university this will be more and more important.

Anonymous
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16 March 2008, 03:06 PM
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Anonymous
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20 March 2008, 09:03 PM
I disagree with the objective statement. Those shouldn't be used as each resume should be part of an overall career strategy. Objectives generalize your resume, which is not valuable to recruiters.

dsarin
Job Seeker • 150
25 April 2008, 09:21 AM
Hi! The format of your resume REALLY stands out! As someone who is also applying for junior year internships in consulting, I think youre resume is extremely strong and I wish you the best of luck in your endeavours. I would really appreciate your comments on my resume as well! Thanks..


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