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davidr
Job Seeker • 15
Posted 30 November 2007, 12:33 AM

IT Systems Analyst

Please rate and review my resume. Thank you resume community!


Career Field
Information Technology
Location
Phoenix, AZ
School
Arizona State University
Major
Communication
Salary Range
$65-70,000


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been said before, but you should cut this down to a signle page.
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Strategy meetings? what are they about? what did you do there?
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this is a duplicate from what you did in your last role
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Just remove this. Its not needed.
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Its awkward with the timeline above, in normal, and then the position in bold below. Perhaps move the date to below the title, or bold the date instead of the title. I would lean towards the former.
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Tweak your margins and see if you can get this info to be totally on the first or second page.
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shouldt include this exhaustive of a list unless they specifically apply to the job youre trying to get.
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Comments

Anonymous
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30 November 2007, 12:38 AM
You have great work experience and solid education. You will need to totally reformat your resume, if you want to make a good impression. No one will look at a 4 page resume--not unless you're Donald Trump.

samb
Resume Expert • 875
30 November 2007, 12:40 AM
I agree, your format needs major work. Other than that, you have good content on your resume. Hope this helps!

samb
Resume Expert • 875
30 November 2007, 12:41 AM
I agree, your format needs major work. Other than that, you have good content on your resume. Hope this helps!

MBB
Job Seeker • 65
30 November 2007, 03:38 AM

Anonymous
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30 November 2007, 08:23 AM

Anonymous
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30 November 2007, 08:26 AM

kyle
Resume Expert • 215
30 November 2007, 12:56 PM
The overall formatting of this resume can be improved, and the language can be tightened up. There are lots of places where you've got descriptions that just barely spill on to two lines. By cutting a few words here and there and you can shorten this down to one page pretty easily.

dengdanhui
Job Seeker • 180
27 January 2008, 02:28 AM
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jjwalk
Job Seeker • 125
11 February 2008, 11:34 AM
You should try to shorten your resume. Not necessarily to one page, but you could fit all of the pertinent info on two pages. I think the "contact information" section is unnecessary. I also think the "Objective" should be removed or made more specific. Looks like you have very strong qualifications and experince, it is just a bit difficult to decifer on your resume.

Anonymous
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18 March 2008, 11:18 AM
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viggin
Job Seeker • 125
17 April 2008, 12:37 AM
Content looks good, but I'm not an expert on that. I left some suggestions for tuning up the formatting.


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