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Avoid I, me or my in a resume. Avoid telling employers what they can do for you. This is all about what you are going to do for THEM!
Id rework this profile. Take a look at my samples on www.keppiecareers.com for suggestions.
I dont think this low GPA will help you much. Maybe avoid listing gpa.
Past verb tense for past jobs. Focus on accomplishments and skills - WHY did what you did MATTER?
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Do not use personal pronouns. This is not suppose to be a narrative but a description of your accomplishments.
Change those §'s to standard bullets.
A good start. Take a look at my samples on my site: www.keppiecareers.com. Yes, use bullet points. Too many long paragraphs. Move education to bottom. Focus on skills and accomplishments!
Good luck!
Miriam