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maryland14
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Posted 30 September 2010, 03:01 AM

Resume 2

Here's my second shot at my resume. I made some revisions. Let me know what you think. I am trying to land an internship in finance.




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samb
Resume Expert • 875
30 September 2010, 01:51 PM
Overall, I like the format and layout. It looks clean and cohesive, however, your bullet language could use some more work. Mostly, I find the bullet language starting at the Activities and the Employment section a little weak. You should try adding more detail, using command/action verbs that are a little more impressive sounding and ultimately quantify your resume more fully. See your education bullets--you do a nice job quantifying them with % figures and other stats. That is highly important for the rest of your bullets as well. Additionally, scrap the Interests section, no one really cares at the resume stage (you can discuss these things in the interview, if they come up). Instead, incorporate a Skills section that lists hard skills such as competencies in computer software, specifically those of statistical/mathematical in nature. Best of luck.


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