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- Country
- United States
- Career Field
- Communications Education Entertainment & Media Human Resources International Relations Nonprofit Public Relations Public Service Research Retail SocialWork Public Policy/Administration Social
- Location
- New York, NY
- Major
- Other
- Salary Range
- $20-25,000 $25-30,000 $30-35,000
Consider combining these two sections into one: Work Experinece. You should also change the format to include bullets and only list your top 3-4 positions. Remember recruiters only want to see the positions most relevant to the job youre applying for. Maybe take off Lifegaurd, for example.
Add bullet points here too. Look at top rated resumes for examples.
Nice work down here! Very clean and clear.
Comments
Nice improvement here. Now that you have your structure in order, consider improving the work experience section. To me, it's confusing to have Employment history, Professional experience and Educational experience. I think you should have just two categories instead 1) Work Experience (that includes your last 3-4 positions held, which can be paid or volunteer) and 2) Activities/Leadership. Also, make sure you use bullet points, for your work history, it will look much more professional.
nice work.