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KevinWallStInsiders
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23 August 2010, 12:41 AM
I'd recommend switching your Work Experience and Education sections. Most of your sentences in your work experience bullet points are run-on sentences and difficult to interpret. For example, I'd simplify and reword your first point to: Initiated process improvement projects to mitigate operational risks introduced by manual data entry and erroneous options valuation. The time savings to the firm is estimated to be 0.25 full-time equivalents or roughly $15,000. I think you have great content, grades, and experience but this resume needs a lot of work. What type of job are you looking for? Happy to discuss in greater detail by email. Best, Kevin Kevin@WallStInsiders.com www.wallstinsiders.com


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