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samb
Resume Expert • 875
Posted 18 November 2007, 07:32 PM

Air Systems Inc.

Over 30 years experience in mechanical profession specializing in design/build projects with special talent for addressing unique applications and providing technical assistance. Engineering, design, project management, corporate management and cost control are all strong points.




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Remove logos from your resume.
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say remove your photo. that should not be part of your resume
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sure to block out contact info.
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should move professional experience to the top and then list your categories
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move professional experience to the top
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So much more could be done here, I feel.
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Perhaps adding some sort of timeline would be useful? When were these done?
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You have a lot of experience, Id be sure to cater/rearrange so that its clear your accomplishments align with the client(s) youre seeking.
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Dont insert a photo unless you are in the netertainment biz.
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No need to include the profile.
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Is this the logo of the company that you are applying for a job at? If so, it could be seen as presumptuous.
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Great job highlighting your experience, you may want to add some specifics though.
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Having 2 sections titled "Porfessional Experience" seems a little redundant. Could you put these two jobs under the same heading?
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Your contact info should always be at or near the top of your resume.
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personal info, FYI
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This side looks a bit short compared to your very full experience half. What you have is great, but perhaps you could flesh it out a bit. Leadership experience within your affiliations.
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Anonymous
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19 November 2007, 10:19 PM
You have great experience, but you're not using a typical resume format. This might work well for a marketing document. Even as a marketing document, I have a few suggestions. Take a look at my text bubbles for more info.

devin
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7 December 2007, 03:05 PM
Perfect resume. Only concern is with the photograph, I'm sure the space could be used for something more. More details on awards? Top successes? Career highlights? Adding more detail to each experience perhaps?

AmysResumes
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18 December 2007, 08:20 PM
Lots of experience, good affiliations and education. You are qualified, but the format of this resume may throw hiring managers off. See my notes for more info and good luck!

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