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DMG184
Job Seeker • 100
Posted 17 November 2007, 06:18 PM

Commerical Property Management Seeker


Major
Marketing


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think you should remove the objective and move the skills section to the bottom of the resume. For skills I would not list personal items. This is something you can discuss in an interview.
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more computer skills, specifically state the programs you know well and have used
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think you should write out Bach of Science and Bach of Arts. BSBA is confusing to people.
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should do more with your job titles. Rather than just having marketing intern--come up with something more specific and important sounding. Also, be sure to list your company on top, then you position on bottom.
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see this as the only place on your resume where you quantify your experience. You should use numbers, time, $ values throughout your resume language!
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samb
Resume Expert • 875
18 November 2007, 07:16 PM
Overall, I think you have a good, clear format for your resume. I would suggest saving the top level information for your cover letter (objective). I think you can also make some big improvements to the language, specifically by quantifying your resume. (See the blue highlight and text box). Also, change your job titles to make them sound more important than just 'intern'. Take a look at other top rated marketing resumes for examples of great language.

Anonymous
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19 March 2008, 11:45 AM
You need to sell your skills and self at the opening of your resume. Rather than an objective, I would summarize your valuable skills,


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