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- Country
- United States
- Career Field
- Architecture Design Public Service Other
- Location
- New York, NY
- School
- St. John¿s University
- Major
- History
- Salary Range
- $20-25,000 $25-30,000 $35-40,000 $45-50,000
I am not a fan of this format. It looks cheesy and unprofessional. I might reconsider it and try out a few other cleaner looking formats without the charts, and shadings, and line breaks etc.
Close up gap.
This first sentence is poorly constructed and pseud-pretentious. I would work on it.
You dont "demonstrate" a BA you earn or obtain one.
I would rework this whole paragraph, it is vague and doesnt quite flow.
I am not a big fan of charts, but if you choose to use one, make sure your skills are precise. These arent too bad
But are slightly redundant to your experience section
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Why/how is this relevant? You could spin it in some way, but putting this here seems odd to me and irrelevant
Make sure your formatting here is consistent with other sections, as it is missing the same placement of the date etc as the section below.
Education not education history
I would just put experience not professional profile
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I would put the Months
Put a range of months
and database management
Why is the date here again? and more so the dates dont match?
Okay! Now I understand the dates, so you hold 2 positions, or were you promoted to the admin asst only? I am a little confused.
For all these bullets, try and be as specific as possible. What were you presenting to teachers etc? I dont really know what you did here.
Close gap.
I would get rid of "mac applications" if you arent going to be precise, you could say "Mac OSX" which is what I think you mean.
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